The Devil Park

The Devil Park

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

She said, ‘Let’s go to the Devil Park,’

At noon, on a summer’s day,

I said, ‘We’d better go after dark,

They hide themselves away.

They only come out to feed at night

So that’s when you see them best,

By day, they never come out to play,

That’s when they get to rest.’

 

We packed the car and we took a torch,

A powerful, bright spotlight,

The only way we would see them there

On a dark and gloomy night,

We waited till it was just on dusk

Then finally hit the road,

The Park was seventy miles away

Or an hour, I’d been told.

 

The gate of the park was locked and barred

But we scaled and climbed across,

That’s when Giselle had torn her dress,

It was old, so no great loss,

We could hear the scrabbling and the screech

Of the small marsupials,

Grubbing around the park for food

And giving out grunts and squeals.

 

The torch lit up in a long wide arc

As we scanned across the ground,

The first one that we saw had roared

When it knew it had been found,

Its jaw was wide and its evil teeth

Could give you a nasty bite,

I wasn’t going to get too close

On that warm and sultry night.

 

We’d wandered round for an hour out there

Had seen groups of two’s and three’s,

And some that were more adventurous

We could see were climbing trees,

When out of the darkness came a voice

That was grating, cold and hard,

‘What do you think, by coming here

To spy in my own backyard?’

 

It made me start, for the torch wheeled round

To illuminate a stump,

And there a figure in shiny black

Was sat, and it made us jump,

The face was narrow and pointed, leered,

Was capped with a pair of horns,

While a long black tail with snake-like scales

Flicked up, like it meant to warn.

 

‘We came to see the marsupials,’

I stuttered, in my distress,

‘We meant no harm, but you just alarmed

Us both, in your fancy dress.’

‘You broke in here, but I see the fear

That I cause you, out in the dark,

What did you think you’d find out here,

You’ve come to the Devil’s Park.’

 

The Devil slowly uncurled himself

And he stood up, ten feet tall,

I saw his claws and his evil jaws

And his goat-like legs, and all,

‘You both may need to redeem yourselves

By paying your court to me,

I’ll make you the lord and lady of

All of the land you see.’

 

And suddenly all the park was lit

In a ghostly, evil glow,

He said, ‘I can give you all of it,

I have the power, you know.’

‘I think that you’ve tried that line before,’

I said, in a sudden shot,

‘And “get thee behind me Satan” was

The answer that you got.’

 

A flame curled out of the Devil’s mouth

As he opened up his jaw,

And fixed me with a piercing glare

As he beat his chest, to roar,

‘You’ll not escape, for I’ll cast my cape

To capture your sinful souls,

And when we meet, it will be a treat

In your seat of glowing coals.’

 

He threw his cape in a whirl until

It covered him like a shroud,

And then went up in a puff of smoke,

As Giselle cried out, aloud,

We raced on back and we scaled the gate

In a massive leap in the dark,

I said, ‘Don’t ever suggest again

We visit the Devil Park!’

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2015 David Lewis Paget


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Brilliant atmospheric write David. The arc of the torch really did it for me. An excellent detail. The suddenly growing devil from the size of imp to ten feet sent a shiver through me. I could see that horrible transformation occur so quick. And it was all about choice. The devil wasnt going to harm them despite how afraid he made them (and the reader feel) - he was merely giving them to power to destroy themselves.
Great write my friend.


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Don't think I want to visit this park. Interesting read David.

Posted 9 Years Ago


love it David and please don't tell me how to get there i'm just dumb enough to go lol, great story and very eerie to, could feel the clammy atmosphere and Satan was a dream.....better make that a nightmare, good character, great story :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Brilliant atmospheric write David. The arc of the torch really did it for me. An excellent detail. The suddenly growing devil from the size of imp to ten feet sent a shiver through me. I could see that horrible transformation occur so quick. And it was all about choice. The devil wasnt going to harm them despite how afraid he made them (and the reader feel) - he was merely giving them to power to destroy themselves.
Great write my friend.


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They'll think twice about breaking into parks after this. When a place is closed, it's generally for a good reason. Maby the park-keepers knew it belonged to the devil at night...

Incidentally, Jesus said "Get thee behind me Satan" to Peter, who was trying to get Him to do something or other...

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A great eerie setting with description of our Australian Marsupials The Tasmanian Devil with those menacing teeth.
Who wouldn't be absolutely freaked out when a Devil especially a Ten Foot One, Towers over you with his claws and evil jaws.
A clever reminder there of the repeat of the Biblical Temptation with the answer ''get thee behind me Satan"
So many mastered lines but I bet their feet didn't touch the ground with
''And when we meet, it will be a treat
In your seat of glowing coals",
as they scaled the Gates of Devil Park with an oath never to return!
A great on the edge of your seat tale DLP.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very clever write. You took things from real life and turned them into a fantastic tale. I always heard about that Tasmanian Devil. I really enjoyed this write. Just keep them coming, you are a master at these stories. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


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How bold of Giselle to suggest visiting the gated community where nocturnal Devils dwell. What did you think that you would find, but a night of utter Hell!! Thank you for taking us on this adventure, Scary as it seems....That Hell was like the nightmares that wake you from your dreams....Frightful, but I really enjoyed the fear contained within, Always an awesome treat, right from the Begin.....Thanks and a request for more....Halloween Poems for my Grandkidz, LOL!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Now you have gone and done it David. What can I say. That is the best work of your's that I have read so far. I think I knew it would be before I started. Since I turned off all sound and read it aloud. Very nice. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I love the tassie devils and knew as soon as you mentioned the word devils lol A charming write :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Set in Tasmania, where there are Tasmanian Devil Parks.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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David Lewis Paget
David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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