Lobster Reef

Lobster Reef

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

An Isle rose up from the ocean swell

On the seventeenth of June,

It was totally unexpected by

The M.V. Cameroon,

She’d sailed with seven passengers

And some cargo in the hold,

They all kept well to their cabins for

The deck was more than cold.

 

The Captain up on the bridge had checked

His maps before they sailed,

Had marked his course dead reckoning

Though the gyro compass failed,

They’d been at sea for eleven days

So he took a fix on the stars,

Then left the wheel to the Bosun while

He searched for the coffee jar.

 

The ship ground up on a coral reef

At two in the morning, sharp,

The night was black as a midden since

The clouds had hidden the stars,

The hull bit deep in the coral as

It drove ahead with its way,

Grinding slowly to come to halt

Just in from a new-formed bay.

 

‘There isn’t supposed to be land out here,’

The Bosun cried to Lars,

The Captain said, ‘I fixed a point,

Dead reckoning by the stars!

There shouldn’t be land in a hundred miles,’

But the ship was high and dry,

‘It must have come up from the ocean floor,’

The Bosun said, ‘but why?’

 

The passengers spilled out onto the deck

With cries and shouts in the gloom,

‘What have you done, the ship’s a wreck,’

Said the Banker, Gordon Bloom.

The sisters, Jan and Margaret Young

Burst out in sobs and tears,

‘How are you going to float it off?

We might be here for years!’

 

At daylight they could see the extent

Of the distant lava flow,

‘Lucky we’re not on the other side

Or we’d all be dead, you know.’

The tide came in and the tide went out

But the ship was high and dry,

As clouds of steam from the lava flow

Poured out, and into the sky.

 

‘We’re not gonna starve,’ said Andy Hill

As he peered down onto the reef,

As thousands of crabs and lobsters crawled

‘There’s plenty of them to eat.’

They lowered him down on a rope, along

With the engineer, Bob Teck,

Where they gathered the lobsters up by hand

And tossed them, up on the deck.

 

The evening meal was a feast that night,

They ate and they drank their fill,

‘Too much,’ said Oliver Aston-Barr

‘I think I’m going to be ill.’

But Jennifer Deane, Costumier

Had an appetite for four,

She ate the scraps that the others left

And was calling out for more.

 

The following morning all was still

Til Jennifer Deane came out,

She roused them all with a frightened scream,

And then continued to shout:

‘I’ve got some horrible bug inside

And I’ve lost my sense of taste,

It must have come from the lobsters, for

It’s eaten half of my face!’

 

The lobsters must have been undercooked

For the symptoms would appal,

A necrotizing flesh eater

Had started on them all,

The flesh was eaten from Andy’s hand

And the leg of Gordon Bloom,

While the sisters Jan and Margaret Young

Lay screaming in their room.

 

The sickness took them rapidly,

For Jennifer Deane had died,

They had no place to bury her

So threw her over the side,

The crabs then swarmed and attacked her there,

Ate all of her flesh away,

There was little left of Jennifer Deane

Before the end of the day.

 

Each time that one of them died, the rest

Would fling them over the side,

The bodies had piled up higher out there

Than those alive, inside,

Til finally, Oliver Aston-Barr

Was last to die, on the bridge,

Of the Motor Vessel Cameroon,

Upthrust on a lava ridge.

 

A winter storm was to float it off,

It drifted out with the tide,

A rusted hulk with ‘The Cameroon’

Paint peeling, off from the side.

An ancient freighter, crossing its path

Drove past it, steel on steel,

And that’s when the helmsman held his breath,

‘There’s a skeleton at the wheel!’

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2014 David Lewis Paget


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As always, your narrative is a rich tapestry of language and design. Your voice is always rich with travels of far off lands and cultures; and I always love the surprise of never knowing whether it's based in reality, history, or both.

What's always so riveting about your work is that one foot is squarely planted in a smidge of truth; and is therefore believable, while the other is planted in the macabre. There's always a twist of terror at the end to wake us from the fog.

Love it!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Another rich and horrifying tale, David....

Posted 10 Years Ago


How gruesome! I love this tale.
I will never feel the same about
crab or lobster! Oh, that was one
tres dedicated captain!
Excellent, as always.
Claire (☆^ー^☆)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eerie and disturbing....you were almost brutal in your approach but thus is the life of an albatross at sea

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's realy gruesome--a flesh eating monstr, and the slow deaths.
I really liked the end, with the sleletonat the wheel.The captain didn't give up his post.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poe and King combined
To make macabre tale sublime

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a story! So wonderfully decadent, and spot on cadence throughout the entire read. Thank you for the read request it was wonderful!.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As always, your narrative is a rich tapestry of language and design. Your voice is always rich with travels of far off lands and cultures; and I always love the surprise of never knowing whether it's based in reality, history, or both.

What's always so riveting about your work is that one foot is squarely planted in a smidge of truth; and is therefore believable, while the other is planted in the macabre. There's always a twist of terror at the end to wake us from the fog.

Love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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