The Landau

The Landau

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

© 2014 David Lewis Paget


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Enjoy this format, Dave...but to not be able to go back into the copy does complicate the reviewing process a tad. Seems like the Black Dog is the waystation where both Death and his prospective clients hang out while awaiting transmittal? Was the "dollymop" (?) so distraught by the death of her beloved that she offed herself?...or was Someone Else in the Landau who performed that service?..or was it simply her misfortune to mount the wrong taxi? An engaging tale, whatever the backstory...as ever!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow..!!! I simply loved the way..the words..the show!!

Keep Sharing..!!

Good Wishes..!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really enjoyed this, Great format, I was enthralled throughout. I'd love to hear you read 'The Highwayman' by Alfred Noyes.

Beccy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brilliant, haunting and captivating imagery. Your delivery captivated me from the moment that you began to speak. An excellent piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Enjoy this format, Dave...but to not be able to go back into the copy does complicate the reviewing process a tad. Seems like the Black Dog is the waystation where both Death and his prospective clients hang out while awaiting transmittal? Was the "dollymop" (?) so distraught by the death of her beloved that she offed herself?...or was Someone Else in the Landau who performed that service?..or was it simply her misfortune to mount the wrong taxi? An engaging tale, whatever the backstory...as ever!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DLP - From start to finish...the story just builds to a climax...and the brevity of it all is told...as you are the narrator...and those that I have come to read and listen-in of your work...this gives much in the lines...I was quick to be drawn-in...the imagery takes us on a helluva ride with this verse...and the ending finishes this quite well...thanks for the invite from Tate...another fine write --- GYM...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved this.. great story...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this! Your words reminded me of Edgar Allan Poe's writing as well as the poem "The HIghwayman" by Alfred Noyes. Nice imagery and your reading was captivating.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very different...a good spoken write...


Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is totally different,i enjoyed it very much

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The sheer descriptive nature and imagery slaps the reader about the ears, nose and throat, terrifying and realistic, a piece of nightmares, well done, great read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 28, 2014
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David Lewis Paget
David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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