The Man with Tales in his Hair

The Man with Tales in his Hair

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

When the sun sank low in the midday sky

And the clouds came in from the south,

He knew that the winter was coming in

And it made him down in the mouth.

With a hint of rain in the morning dew

The breeze cut in like a knife,

And he went to fetch the firewood in

For the sake of his invalid wife.

 

She sat and shivered before the hearth

When he opened the outer door,

As the wind whipped icily round her legs

A trail of leaves on the floor,

‘My love, be still, I’m lighting the fire

And you’ll soon be warm by the hearth.’

‘I fear it’s settling into my bones

And I’ll soon be deep in the earth.’

 

‘You’ll not get away so easily,’

He said, and gave her a smile,

‘We’ll settle this ague with bark and tea,

I’ll heat your bath in a while.’

‘I’d rather not leave the fireplace

While my thoughts are making me brood,

So put your spill to the wood fire, Will,

Then sit, and lighten my mood.’

 

He lit the fire and he made it roar

And he checked each draught, at last,

Jammed the rug right under the door

And he made the windows fast,

Then he sat and held his Helen’s hand

That was freezing to the touch,

And said, ‘Now winter’s sat on the land

I needn’t go out so much!’

 

She smiled, and ran a hand through his hair

And said that she loved him so,

‘Tell me a tale of foreign lands,

It will help the time to go.’

So he plucked a single hair from his head

And he said, ‘Each hair’s a tale!’

Then he told of sailors swinging the lead,

Of mariners under sail.

 

He told of pirates, walking the plank

Of treasure chests in the deep,

And saw that she was slumbering there,

Was slowly going to sleep,

He sat beside her all through the night,

Was piling wood on the fire,

And nodded off in the broad daylight

Right next to his heart’s desire.

 

The squalls came in, it began to rain

And the rain then turned to snow,

He only went out to chop some wood

And to make the cabin glow.

Each night he’d sit there, holding her hand

And he’d pluck a hair from his head,

‘Now here’s a tale from a northern land

Where the snow lies deep,’ he said.

 

He thought that she’d get better in time

And he brought her gruel and soup,

Fed her a tincture of laudanum

Made from the opium group.

But she still sat listless, pale and wan

And she slept more than she woke,

Though he plucked a hair from his head each night

And he whispered as he spoke.

 

He spoke of the place that lovers go

Away from the world of cares,

Of bubbling springs, and diamond rings

And a love that everyone shares,

But the snow outside was packed in a drift

Right up and over the door,

He couldn’t get out for the firewood

But shivered, asleep on the floor.

 

He woke next day when the sky was grey

With the cold set deep in his bones,

And looked at his wife in a mute dismay

For he knew that he was alone.

The undertaker was there by ten

With a coffin as cold as ice,

And he wept as he plucked a hair from his head

And wished her in paradise.

 

They buried her down in the cemetery

Not far from their cabin home,

And every day he would make his way

To her headstone, on his own.

The snow had finally melted when

They found he was there, stone dead,

Draped all over her headstone, but

There wasn’t a hair on his head.

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2013 David Lewis Paget


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Absolutely mesmerizing my friend!! Oh, how I could just see it all as I read your words - and you know just how good you are at doing such as this! The devotion he showed his dear wife through all the days of the winter cold and then to have her die as not the end as he continued to visit her as she rested in eternal sleep. I do wonder what was the last story he told her when he plucked the only remaining hair left for him to give to her!!
My favorite line is of how he wished her in paradise.........so very tender!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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A beautiful, tragic love story that is mesmerizing...
...'he spoke of the place that lovers go away from the world of cares, of bubbling springs, and diamond rings and a love that everyone shares...'
pat~

Posted 11 Years Ago


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A very vivid and sympathetic story, my friend. I love the devotion portrayed and the metaphor of the plucking of his hair from his sweet head.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Oh, dear! A tale of undying devotion til the very end. I love how his love for her caused his humor to be on display in hopes of making her better. This actually reminds me of a true story some years ago where the wife passed, and her husband would make his way to her grave daily. They actually found him dead at her grave. Now, that's the kind of love worth living for.

You are a storyteller without rival.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Oh this rolls so well off the tongue Damn Dave if I take up writing here again soon I hope I have picked up your ability to phrase .This is what a good marriage is. You hear of those married most their lives . One dies and the other follows. That is the way it is meant to be

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Brillaint. Imaginative. Fabulous ending. 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Very sweet and very sad David...a man endured baldness to give his wife joy...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Such a sad tale David. It brought tears to my eyes.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Absolutely mesmerizing my friend!! Oh, how I could just see it all as I read your words - and you know just how good you are at doing such as this! The devotion he showed his dear wife through all the days of the winter cold and then to have her die as not the end as he continued to visit her as she rested in eternal sleep. I do wonder what was the last story he told her when he plucked the only remaining hair left for him to give to her!!
My favorite line is of how he wished her in paradise.........so very tender!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very imaginative poem, David. This is quite clever and thoroughly enjoyed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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