The Key

Reviews

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

Is there a written-out version anywhere? My friend recommended this to me, but I have an obstinate old computer combined with slow internet that frequently refuses to play videos- such as now. I really would love to find out what is so good that my friend recommended this, however!

[Rene Velez]

well done, great way to deliver a poem, enjoyed.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Love your videos...they add oomph to your story ... great job........

[carol burgess romance]

Wow filled with suspense...just exhaled...holding my breath as the tide was comimg in....you my Sir have a tale for story telling...great work.

[Marie]

I was biting my lip up till the end of this saga, hoping he'd get the key. I could see her sinking lower...and lower...until it was too late for either of them...

[OBWhiteHawk]

Very touching and intense, its crazy what love and lust can do to people.

[Dayran]

We are always the wiser after the event but not before. Great delivery and lines David ... a pleasure as always.

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

Oh! Sir David, I must confess. This is wonderful compelling story poem. I enjoy your narrative. Well done Sir.

[Sunni Davis]

Wow! Such a compelling story! And you tell it so well. Its amazing what some people will do to try to trap another, all in the name of love.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

DAVID - I LIKED THE SUSPENSE AND NARRATION OF THIS WORK...THE PACE AND FLOW AS YOU GO ABOUT TELLING BOTH SIDES...HE IN HANDCUFFS AND SHE WITH THE KEY...YET THE DILEMMA OF IT ALL OF AN EXTRA-MARITAL AFFAIR GLOOM OVER THEIR HEADS...SHE LIES TO GET WANT SHE WANTS OF A CHILD WHO IS NOT EVEN CONCEIVED IN THE END AND HE TELLS HER THE TRUTH ABOUT THE DIVORCE...BUT THE TRUTH TO THE MATTER IS...THIS IS THE WAY IT'S SUPPOSE TO END...TOGETHER THEY SUFFER THE AGONY OF THE SEA...THE KEY DOES NOT MAKE IT QUITE IN TIME...