The Hand of Tong Bao Lin

The Hand of Tong Bao Lin

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

© 2013 David Lewis Paget


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A favorite and that's no doubt.

I may be repetitious but I find it fascinating and helpful when I get to hear the author recite his own work. It brings more layers to the words and a reader can learn the rhythm with which to read the passages in.

I've seen several of your videos now David..... they are wild and fun and demonstrate the full measure of your writing that was just fine in print. Adding your personality and speaking rhythms just sweetens the pot all the more. Thanks for taking the time to produce these videos.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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What an amazing poem! A gripping story with very interesting twists and turns. You sure have a way with words and a great imagination. I loved it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow very very good! I LOVE the way you have of telling stories with your poetry. I can only strive to be as great a poet as you are David. Thank you for sharing another of your wonderful works with me.

Mysty

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed listening to you reciting this poem...Its the first video I have seen of you reading...looking forward to listening to more of your poems David...SyberRose

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful....
such an undefinable style to his work...
provocative piece

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What an interesting way to present your work.
Love the fact that I hear your words in your voice...it makes it more personal I think.
I enjoyed reading the lines as you read.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

David is a established poet, talented, who writes excellently...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Thank you for the amazing verbal poetry. Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts. I like the verbal poetry. This will be my next step very soon.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that is a very strange story, like that of kafka. it was also disturbing. it's amazing the man became possessed by that hand's predecessor. could make for a good movie. i enjoyed it very much.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a crazy creepy great poem!!! i agree with @roarke...i like how you narrated the poem and kudos for this poem and kudos also for your great voice it gave the poem a creepy vibe but in a good manner.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sorry i cant review this for you david, all that is coming up from the read request is a blank square.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on April 6, 2013
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David Lewis Paget
David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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