The Pitiless Knight

The Pitiless Knight

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

‘What do you play with my mistress here

In the dark before the dawn,

How did you come by the chamber key,

Is the locksmith now foresworn?

I fear the devil has dipped your tongue

In a crucible of lies,

But truth will out when I have you hung

And I peer in your lying eyes!’

 

‘Good Sir, I beg your indulgence

For the door, it was ajar,

I had no need of a key, I heard

My Lady scream, afar,

It echoed down through the passageway

And into the servants hall,

I entered for her protection, Sire,

I sware, and that is all!’

 

The knight then pulled back the curtains

Of the great four poster bed,

And there was his mistress Carolyn,

His bride, and newly wed,

She clutched the covers about her throat

Her face was pale and white,

He saw that her hands had trembled there

With fear, or else with fright.

 

‘And what is the truth of this, my dear,

Will you save this lying cur?

Did you really scream at a nightmare scene

Did you leave the door ajar?

I’ve been a-hunting the grisly boar

But came on back, ahead,

When good Sir Roland excused him there

And the boar was good and dead.’

 

‘Oh husband, if I could tell you now

I would, upon my life,

I set the lock in my chamber door

As it would a seemly wife,

I heard a sound that had frightened me

But it must have been in sleep,

Whoever opened the chamber door

I thought I heard him creep.’

 

‘Good sir, it’s just as I said, the door

Was unlocked, and opened wide,

Whoever undid the lock, it wasn’t I,

I have not lied,

My lady screamed, if it was a dream

I know not, speaking true,

When first I saw it was open, Sire,

I thought it might be you.’

 

The knight unsheathed his sword, and held

It high above his head,

The servant dropped to his knees, ‘Oh please!

You hold my life in dread!’

‘Methinks that you are the only one

Within my lady’s sight,

What did you think to do with her,

Speak now, before I strike!’

 

‘Oh Sire, I lied for the lady there,

I have no axe to grind,

I saw him who had accosted her

But she didn’t seem to mind.’

‘You lie, you blethering peasant troll,

You lie! " take off his head!’

Screamed Carolyn from beneath the sheets

Of the great four poster bed.

 

A curtain stirred in an alcove then

And a knight came into view,

‘My God,’ said the jilted husband then,

‘Sir Roland, it was you!’

‘I could not watch an innocent man

Be cleft for a sin of mine,

I’d thought to have sweet Carolyn

Before, when you came to dine.’

 

Sir Roland drew out his burnished sword

And he said, ‘Be on your guard!

If I have to kill you now, I will

Though the killing will be hard.

But stand aside and we both may go

For the sake of friendship past…’

The knight struck out at him in rage

‘That friendship’s gone, at last!’

 

The servant ran from the chamber then

To call the guard at arms,

By the time the two of them ran on back

It was too late for alarms,

Sir Roland lay in a pool of blood

And the knight just stood, and cried,

For Carolyn sat up straight in bed,

But her head lay close beside!

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2013 David Lewis Paget


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Perfectly narrated! Your narration skills are unparalleled..... I don't think anyone on writers cafe would disagree with me....
Your rhyme scheme never fails to amuse me.... You always leave your reader in aw!!
The ending was unexpected....
Writers like you are very rare sir and i feel being able to review you.... It's an honor always.....
With every poem you set a new standard for yourself....
Although if I may beg your indulgence, i would like you to revisit the 7th line of your first stanza... "But truth will out when I have you hung"
Instead of out, you may use 'spring'..... It's just an opinion and nothing else.... I respect you a lot......
Thank you for sharing!
Yet another great poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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THree deaths...I hope Lady Carolyn was worth it...

Sir Roland showed himself to be a man of honour when he refused to let a servant atke punishment for his deed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the way your voice changes---the voice here is perfect for knights and castles and boar hunting! The story was well told and ended with a bang!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem read even more like a story than it read like poetry.
I'm not sure why, but I hardly noticed the rhyme because the story felt so natural in the telling.
Wonderful David.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perfectly narrated! Your narration skills are unparalleled..... I don't think anyone on writers cafe would disagree with me....
Your rhyme scheme never fails to amuse me.... You always leave your reader in aw!!
The ending was unexpected....
Writers like you are very rare sir and i feel being able to review you.... It's an honor always.....
With every poem you set a new standard for yourself....
Although if I may beg your indulgence, i would like you to revisit the 7th line of your first stanza... "But truth will out when I have you hung"
Instead of out, you may use 'spring'..... It's just an opinion and nothing else.... I respect you a lot......
Thank you for sharing!
Yet another great poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

" What do you play with my mistress here"...wow...Thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 13, 2013
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David Lewis Paget
David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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