Lightning Jack

Lightning Jack

A Poem by David Lewis Paget








 


© 2013 David Lewis Paget


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This is the absolute greatest poem ever written on the cafe. I can't say enough about the work Or the delivery. It is the kind of thing we all read and say God why couldn't i write that? It's stunning beautiful .The depth of the words and story have no peer. As I have always said there is but one Eiffel Tower one Niagra Falls One God and One Paget! !


Posted 11 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.




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wow, can still hear the crack of that lightning.....great poem ....poor Jack

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome! Awesome! Thank you so much for sending this our way. Hearing you read your words brought a whole new level of breathlessness to the piece. Casey and I loved it, David! He will be over shortly to leave his own review. Angi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Henry Lawson meets RW Service.
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Great campfire stuff. Thanks so much for the poem and the hard work put into the presentation. Your reading is excellent. Australia should give you a late-night slot on radio; I can just see all the kids in SA coorying under the blankets as your voice comes out the speaker. My old man used to read me things like Montreal Maree with the lights out - and I loved it. Thanks for taking me back.
smashing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with Tate, stunning...every word line and the deliverance! The sound affects add to the eerie tones, just loved it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved the poem and the rain and the lightening and everything...and of course you.
Very enjoyable David...thank you for posting...SyberRose

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow !! Wow!!! Awesome simply awesome, especially to hear it from the poet himself. I simply enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing David!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Epic...Again the new Virgil takes his turn on a twisted tale rhymed to perfect verse. Who said a perfect tale ever needs to be written in prose when Mr. Paget can strip it down to it bare essence and hang it like a disturbing and provocative trophy for all to see.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Having you read the poem was wonderful. Another superb work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a lot of fun. I love all the smarmy dramatics. Very entertaining.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow... is all i can say...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 23, 2013
Last Updated on March 7, 2013

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David Lewis Paget
David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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