Lightning Jack

 

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

This is the absolute greatest poem ever written on the cafe. I can't say enough about the work Or the delivery. It is the kind of thing we all read and say God why couldn't i write that? It's stunning beautiful .The depth of the words and story have no peer. As I have always said there is but one Eiffel Tower one Niagra Falls One God and One Paget! !

[carol burgess romance]

wow, can still hear the crack of that lightning.....great poem ....poor Jack

[Angi]

Awesome! Awesome! Thank you so much for sending this our way. Hearing you read your words brought a whole new level of breathlessness to the piece. Casey and I loved it, David! He will be over shortly to leave his own review. Angi~

[cartera]

Henry Lawson meets RW Service.
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Great campfire stuff. Thanks so much for the poem and the hard work put into the presentation. Your reading is excellent. Australia should give you a late-night slot on radio; I can just see all the kids in SA coorying under the blankets as your voice comes out the speaker. My old man used to read me things like Montreal Maree with the lights out - and I loved it. Thanks for taking me back.
smashing.

[Bubo]

I agree with Tate, stunning...every word line and the deliverance! The sound affects add to the eerie tones, just loved it.

[SyberRose]

Loved the poem and the rain and the lightening and everything...and of course you.
Very enjoyable David...thank you for posting...SyberRose

[Manpreet]

Wow !! Wow!!! Awesome simply awesome, especially to hear it from the poet himself. I simply enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing David!!!

[K. D. Kromminga]

Epic...Again the new Virgil takes his turn on a twisted tale rhymed to perfect verse. Who said a perfect tale ever needs to be written in prose when Mr. Paget can strip it down to it bare essence and hang it like a disturbing and provocative trophy for all to see.

[JM Russell]

Having you read the poem was wonderful. Another superb work.

[Malcolm J. Watt]

This is a lot of fun. I love all the smarmy dramatics. Very entertaining.

[Butch Decatoria]

wow... is all i can say...