Lightning Jack

 

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

This is the absolute greatest poem ever written on the cafe. I can't say enough about the work Or the delivery. It is the kind of thing we all read and say God why couldn't i write that? It's stunning beautiful .The depth of the words and story have no peer. As I have always said there is but one Eiffel Tower one Niagra Falls One God and One Paget! !

[Levi Levin]

The creativity of this piece is amazing! A marvelous piece of art indeed!
100/100

[WILDERNESS]

Splendid poem. Excellent thing done here.........

[SM Davis]

Very clever. Epic even. perfect meter, your handsome accent makes the grade!

[Jane Winters Rogers]

Perfectly written and read.

[Laura Ashley Lord]

You have the perfect voice for reciting. I rarely enjoy being "read to," but this was astounding. Absolutely stunning imagery and a solid story line. Great work.

[shallimarRose]

This is exquisite David. The storm in the back ground gives this such an strong impact. Absolutely outstanding. xo Rose

[melissa]

This is amazing poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more keep them coming

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

I so mush appreciate the story line. Another wonderful thing over there is the alternate rhyme. I appreciate its sound. Well done sir.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the amazing story. Good to hear your voice. I like the character in the tale. Always a pleasure to read or hear your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[TrimarcoRansome]

Brilliant! well penned, well told! you inspire me to try something different to what I am used to doing.. thank you so much for sharing your work