Lightning Jack
A Poem by
David Lewis Paget
© 2013 David Lewis Paget
Featured Review
This is the absolute greatest poem ever written on the cafe. I can't say enough about the work Or the delivery. It is the kind of thing we all read and say God why couldn't i write that? It's stunning beautiful .The depth of the words and story have no peer. As I have always said there is but one Eiffel Tower one Niagra Falls One God and One Paget! !
Posted 11 Years Ago
5 of 5 people found this review constructive.
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The creativity of this piece is amazing! A marvelous piece of art indeed!
100/100
Posted 5 Years Ago
The creativity of this piece is amazing! A marvelous piece of art indeed!
100/100
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Splendid poem. Excellent thing done here.........
Posted 7 Years Ago
Splendid poem. Excellent thing done here.........
Very clever. Epic even. perfect meter, your handsome accent makes the grade!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Very clever. Epic even. perfect meter, your handsome accent makes the grade!
Perfectly written and read.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Perfectly written and read.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
You have the perfect voice for reciting. I rarely enjoy being "read to," but this was astounding. Absolutely stunning imagery and a solid story line. Great work.
Posted 10 Years Ago
You have the perfect voice for reciting. I rarely enjoy being "read to," but this was astounding. Absolutely stunning imagery and a solid story line. Great work.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is exquisite David. The storm in the back ground gives this such an strong impact. Absolutely outstanding. xo Rose
Posted 10 Years Ago
This is exquisite David. The storm in the back ground gives this such an strong impact. Absolutely outstanding. xo Rose
This is amazing poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more keep them coming
Posted 10 Years Ago
This is amazing poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more keep them coming
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I so mush appreciate the story line. Another wonderful thing over there is the alternate rhyme. I appreciate its sound. Well done sir.
Posted 11 Years Ago
I so mush appreciate the story line. Another wonderful thing over there is the alternate rhyme. I appreciate its sound. Well done sir.
Thank you for the amazing story. Good to hear your voice. I like the character in the tale. Always a pleasure to read or hear your amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
Thank you for the amazing story. Good to hear your voice. I like the character in the tale. Always a pleasure to read or hear your amazing poetry.
Coyote
Brilliant! well penned, well told! you inspire me to try something different to what I am used to doing.. thank you so much for sharing your work
Posted 11 Years Ago
Brilliant! well penned, well told! you inspire me to try something different to what I am used to doing.. thank you so much for sharing your work
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on January 23, 2013
Last Updated on March 7, 2013
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