Excellent. Truly going to be a classic one of these days Mr. Paget. I'm not certain whether that story would lull me to sleep or not, or leave me staring at the ceiling wide eyed and awake till dawn. Oh well I'd rather sleep during the day the night owl that I am.
Thank you for the verbal poetry. A poem read by the writer allowed the reader to feel the desire and the purpose of this poem. I would leave the words with the poem. Give the reader opportunity to see the words and listen to the Poet. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Nice one mate. Probably the mother of all myths, not famous for child raising but with great ideas on how to deal with a man who's over demanding and presumes its his right to do so. Keep truckin.'
Fantastic write..and I agree with Tate..your poetry is going to be really famous one day..I pray soon so you can enjoy the acclaim while you are still on earth..you are one talented story teller..Kathie
Such a macabre telling of a tale from our distant past. It is the nightmare come true. As if the demons let loose upon us were made real an d present in our lives. This is the tale that wouild make Poe Applaud! Yours are the creations the world will one day come to say Priceless!!
I am speechless in awe of your outstanding and remarkable reading of this story. The manner in which your voice recites it, and cloak covering your head protray the story with such professional poise. The scene you have put into place creates an errie environment fit for the audience to savor. This is yet another spectacular
offering David. Your voice is perfect to render a spine chilling deliverance. Outstanding David, outstanding!!!