unbelievable Dave, if i may call you so?
where do you get these ideas from!
you are the most talented story poet i've ever come across!
i must say!
i'm spun deep through my head!
u keep my edgy 'til the very last line, satisfying my every plea, and every thought of mine! not that i can see your endings coming, they're most farfetched, but you seem to have a handle well when it comes to poetry, because you can still make a stand!
i love your work!
Welcome to my parlour said the spider to the fly. Very interesting concept, I would say. And even though to some the ending might be dark, I found it humorous.
unbelievable Dave, if i may call you so?
where do you get these ideas from!
you are the most talented story poet i've ever come across!
i must say!
i'm spun deep through my head!
u keep my edgy 'til the very last line, satisfying my every plea, and every thought of mine! not that i can see your endings coming, they're most farfetched, but you seem to have a handle well when it comes to poetry, because you can still make a stand!
i love your work!
Nice , i mean i hate spiders rather be thrown in the lions din, but this is a spider relation i can work with. either way this was nice description on the spidets word , eductional and entertaining. either way i noticed your work really does sound amazing with a grest flow out loud, well done.