Some

A Poem by Davshdol

Some want to kiss

Some want to kick you

You're intentions were good

But we all misunderstood

Your poor demeanor is craking

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Good poem, leaves plenty of room for the reader to interpret in different ways. Nice work!

eh the rhyming scheme is off. and it bothered me throughout.
sorry

xoxoxxoxoxooxox

-Queenie-

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Added on March 6, 2008

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Rhyming

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