Some

Some

A Poem by Davshdol
"

I was just bored

"

Some want to kiss

Some want to kick you

You're intentions were good

But we all misunderstood

Your poor demeanor is craking

© 2008 Davshdol


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Good poem, leaves plenty of room for the reader to interpret in different ways. Nice work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


eh the rhyming scheme is off. and it bothered me throughout.
sorry

xoxoxxoxoxooxox

-Queenie-

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 6, 2008

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Davshdol
Davshdol

Carson City, NV



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