Torn.

Tender glances.
My heart skips a beat the moment you're in my sight.
Suddenly, it's hard to concentrate.
I find every excuse, I can't help it. I'm drawn.
Like a magnet. I'm pulled towards you; against my will.
But how I want this.
I'm torn.

Reviews

[Abraham Kureshi]

Short, but strongly expressed!
Good read.

[Chris Shaw]

Love has that magnetic pull. It's intoxicating, but it also creates a feeling of losing control. Your short poem sums that up well. Nice little piece you have written here.

[April Blue]

Lovely piece ... . enjoyed reading it...

[Govind singh]

Such a lovely piece... especially the last lines like a magnet I'm pulled towards u against My will...no words.. thank you for sharing Ur wonderful thoughts..

[Anise]

i do understand that magnet feeling, the pull to someone.
enjoyed this

[Gee]

Hi David, Torn between ???? Is she taken, are you ?
Think the "your" in 2nd line should be you're.

[Pash]

I appreciate that. Good looking out.