Sea of Petals

She is exquisite.
Warm sunbeams on a rainy day,
the rarest flower among a sea of petals.

I am captivated.
Her scent lingers still,
the most beautiful tree in my garden.

I am smitten.

Reviews

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Poem is very precise in chosen words. I can feel empathy and positive energy running out of your poem. It's nicely done .

[Chris Shaw]

When I read your poem, I thought about a cherry tree I used to have in my garden, all that beautiful blossom in spring. Yes it is captivating and the scent does linger and I enjoyed the way you approached this. You have a poetic nature.

[Pash]

Thank you so much for your kind words. It's greatly appreciated. I'm stoked you enjoyed it. read moreThank you so much for your kind words. It's greatly appreciated. I'm stoked you enjoyed it.

[Chris Shaw]

I will. I have a few spare minutes, so will look at some more of your work.

[Abraham Kureshi]

Great work. Really enjoyed .
Couldn't have written better...

[Pash]

Wow!
Thank you for your review kind Sir!

[Richard McLin]

Wow dude that was short and sweet and I mean that in the best possible way. This was just a great piece.
-Richard

[Kelly Scheppers]

"...the rarest flower among a sea of petals." Very eloquent, David!