A Voyage.

About someone I love and hate that I do.

I find myself swimming in your laughter.

I'm swept away by the enchanting melody of how you say my name.
Instantly, euphoric waves carry me out to sea.

You are the ocean.
I am drifting further away from reality.

My heart has set sail.

Reviews

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem is a breathtakingly beautiful expression of the overwhelming power of love and attraction. The way you describe the feeling of being swept away by someone's laughter and the sound of your name on their lips is truly enchanting, and the ocean metaphor you use to describe the depth and intensity of your emotions is particularly striking. The way you write about the feeling of drifting away from reality and losing yourself in the experience of love is both relatable and deeply moving. Overall, I found your poem to be a captivating and heartfelt tribute to the power of love and the way it can transform us in profound and unexpected ways. Keep writing!

[Pash]

Wow! Thank you so much for such a tremendous review!

[Chris Shaw]

I love the way you have approached this. It is beautifully written. You are talented.

[Abraham Kureshi]

It's beautiful dude...
Thanks for sharing.

[Pash]

Thank you Sir for taking the time to review this one. I appreciate it.

[Ardra]

Sometimes it's hard to catch hold of your heart once it's left the harbour.... :)
Lovely poem...

[Pash]

I'm so happy you enjoyed it Rapunzel. Thank you so much for the kind words.

[Kelly Scheppers]

One could get lost in the ambiance of this. I did. Beautiful delivery, David.

[Govind singh]

I can't say about one sentence that is beautiful bcoz the whole poem is so wonderful..:)

[Pash]

This thank you is 5 years late, but its just as appreciate.

[Anise]

You describe something so relatable with such simple elegance.
Lovely poem. Enjoyed.

[Pash]

I've just returned from my voyage! lol Thank you for the kind words.