Lonely Fish

Lonely Fish

A Poem by Pash
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So you think being a lonely person is rough? Imagine being a lonely fish.

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Surrounded by an ocean that is deep, dark and vast, 
Occupied by every creature. Lovely, ruthless, and crass.
The lucky one's are chosen, the others become snacks 
to those who remain frozen, beware the shark attack. 

© 2015 Pash


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There's a pier at this beach I go to that's about a mile and a half long. When you get to the end of it and turn around, it's pretty frightening to see just how far out you really are from the shore. But it also makes me think about what's lurking beneath the water...just like this did!

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Really enjoyed reading this.. Great work!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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 Pash

6 Years Ago

Thank you April. I appreciate your kind words.
April Blue

6 Years Ago

Your very welcome... :)
There's a pier at this beach I go to that's about a mile and a half long. When you get to the end of it and turn around, it's pretty frightening to see just how far out you really are from the shore. But it also makes me think about what's lurking beneath the water...just like this did!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the imagery, you use i read that with ease keep up the amazing work

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Pash

1 Year Ago

You're too kind! I know the thank you is hella late but thank you!

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