King white lies' kingdom of hypocrisy

 Say you're a king?

 Say you'll take me under your wing?

 Say you're a king?

 Where's your crown, and palace "king"?

 

 You say your people are loyal

 You have yet to see their true thoughts.

 You say you're crown is gold

 But you have yet to show me proof "king"

 

 Hey, king white lies I see past your kingdom of hypocrisy

 What do you take me for?

 Hey, king white lies I see past your kingdom of hypocrisy

 I'm not blind to your lies.

 

 You say to follow you blindly

 I ask why must you cover my eyes

 I know now that it's only so I can't see past your lies

 So proud of what? All your little lies, and false hearts, "king" right?

 

 I'd think again before bowing

 I'd think again before praising

 Well, I guess that's just me cause you have everyone else fooled, huh?

 Take your crown of thorns, and kingdom somewhere else cause it's sickened!

Reviews

[K-mo]

Well it's obvious what your saying here, so i am going to say this. I like it because it is real emotion and is written well but the message is another story

[David the writer]

Yeah, my parents are still forcing their theology down my throat. thanks

[K-mo]

well I know when people are trying to make you see something their way, we often go the opposite way, but we got to try to see things in both perspectives

[David the writer]

I have. I get they want me not to go to hell or whatever, but they also beleive in free choice. So maybe they should look at it from my point of view

[K-mo]

yeah it is said that Christians can be a bit pushy, but we mean well by it

[David the writer]

My parents go beyond pushy. I know it may sound like an overreaction but when they say satan himself as possed my brother cause he shaved his head. Oh and when they freaked out cause he said he isn't a christian. Know what they did? They f*****g tried to get me to get the phone so they could call for an excersism. So, pushy I can handle but that's a whole different story. But others well when others get pushy I push back ;) I'm called devil boy at my school cause I don't beleive in god >.>

[Forever Hidden]

Wow. I'm soooo sorry David... I thought my parents were pushy

[K-mo]

well they may be a little extreme, but demons can posses people

[David the writer]

Don't worry, someone always has it worse. I don't mind being that person when it comes to parents cause I can get out of her and prove them that I don't need god to do what I please.

[David the writer]

Well if they do, do you think they'd make people shave their heads? And aren't they supposed to do creepy stuff, and talk in latin which my brother does neither. He knows latin, but he doesn't speak it

[K-mo]

No it's not like that at all, they control people's thoughts and actions at times

[David the writer]

Okay, well trust me. My bro isn't possesed at all. Cause I could tell. Like he'd be violent, and more agressive about things. He hasn't acted off at all. I mean it would be pretty easy to see if he was.

[K-mo]

Don't judge all Christians by how your parents are is all I ask

[Forever Hidden]

Yeah. They do things they never have thought of or never or something like that.... It's quite scary. It's creepier with "ghosts". In my religion, ( I'm not going to go into religious things but I wanted to tell you so you can be aware ) the people who are dead are dead. They never will come out of there graves ( only to go to heaven or hell ).. We call the "ghosts"
jinns. They take the form of the person who is dead to play a prank or make them scared..

That was long.... Sorry david

[David the writer]

Trust me, i've done things that was said to get people possesed, and i'm not. but i'll head your warning. AND I don't "judge" all people just from what two people are like. Other christians are pushy, and wont think about religous sensetivity. It's their god, or no god. And it's annoying, very annoying! Cause I don't beleive in any god what so ever

[K-mo]

well sorry you feel that way

[Forever Hidden]

I don't like the way this is going....

[David the writer]

I'm sorry we disagree. I remember when I was a christian. It killed me on the inside when people I liked were'nt christians.

[K-mo]

And that is how I feel in this situation

[David the writer]

I could only imagine that pain now it's been too long to know exactly how much it hurts. Remember, names are never erased from the book ;)

[Forever Hidden]

Oh... It's okay David. People are all different, and that's what makes us unique bro :)

[K-mo]

well that is the truth, that doesn't make it all better but it helps haha

[David the writer]

Trust me, "devil boy" understands people are uniqe and beleive differently