Being different is indifferent

I wrote this because I was at school, and I was reminded of a problem our school had last year. Girls excluded others because of silly things such as hair style symbols drawn on them clothes ect

 I am me, and you are you

 Wow, I bet you can't beleive that's true

 So wonderful, so beautiful, that you are orginal

 This way of making humans is traditional

 

 I love to be honest, and tell you what I really think

 I don't like cheese because it's smell has a very nasty stink

 I bet you love cheese, but I am just different

 I bet you didn't know being different is indifferent

 

 Oh the fun, oh the intense detail, oh the massive variety

 These ideals are supported by not only by me, but also by society

 It's always fun to ask another their view

 You may just learn something new 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

This was me trying out a D.r Seuss aproach at pointing out my point :D

Reviews

[DaturaBlossoms]

It's a good concept but it definitely needs editing. The constant grammatical errors are a huge distraction.

[David the writer]

Yeah... i'm going to go through my writing list, and clean it up... This is pretty bad! *sigh* I tried to be like Dr. Seuss one of my favourite poets, but as you can see it's not my thing.

[RachelReaper]

you are know crowned new Dr. Seusville! *crowns David*

[David the writer]

lol trust me i'm NOwhere NEAR Dr. Suess! lol

[RachelReaper]

oh... sorry, man *de-crowns David*

[David the writer]

lol I do love your compliment though. It almost made me blush... ALMOST

[RachelReaper]

haha, I just imagine Charlie blushing, ya know, cause of your profile pic :D lol

[David the writer]

lmao I wish I looked lick Charlie Sheen. sometimes sound like him too

[RachelReaper]

...BWAHAHAHAHA!!!! sorry, all I saw when I looked this over was , "I wish i could lick Charlie Sheen" and I was like, what?! but then I looked it over again and was like, oh.... never mind, that's not what you said... lol

[David the writer]

lol why would I want to lick Charlie Sheen?

[RachelReaper]

that's what I was wondering... XD

[David the writer]

XD

[deepblue04]

the dr seuss approach totally worked for this because I totally agree with this. a power to you for doing it in such a fabulous way!

[David the writer]

Thanks! U seem to like my writing

[deepblue04]

oh, yes! and i'm going through my read request. but I seriously do enjoy the writing

[David the writer]

Great to hear!

[Forever Hidden]

How old are you? This is just amazing. I read almost all of your writing, and almost each one of them has a message deep inside. That is why I am asking. Its ok if it is personal.

[David the writer]

It's not personal, I'm 13

[Forever Hidden]

That's amazing your 13 and can write hecka good! Well for me it is good bcuz im 11. -_______________-

[David the writer]

Wow? I was told by a lot of people I was too young to write. Of course I had my supporting brothers, and now Maddie. thanx for the review. I love fans!

[Forever Hidden]

Who doesn't? If you love fans, then become famous, you have to deal with it everyday! XD And, NO ONE is too young to write. There sayin that cuz there jealous

[David the writer]

Yeah, I hate it when people get jelly

[afra]

wow i love this ...great write ...well done

[Freedom's Child]

The flow is great but more importantly the message is terrific. I love the title. Using the Cheese metaphor was great! Nice work!

[Irvette Dauphine]

this is good.. like it :)
great job...

[Harley (arbiter)]

Lol that was pretty good man! I liked it a lot. Keep it up and you might have your own book like dr.seuss :D

[David the writer]

Thanx, I had a lot of D.r Seuss today at school. So I decided to do a little poem styled like him, and adressing a problem

[Harley (arbiter)]

It worked out very well

[David the writer]

Thanx bro

[Harley (arbiter)]

Anytime! Well not really but you get it :D

[David the writer]

Yeah I understand