Internet Dating

"Her profile picture was of her sitting and looking straight up into the camera. But 

not with her whole head. Just her eyes. It was the sexiest thing I've ever seen.

I fear I can only be attracted to her if she's looking up at me like that though. It 

will make sleeping next to each other difficult." 

Reviews

[Rochelle Tyler]

Ha, your speakers always have a way of ruining their own happiness. Your One-Hitters are great because they nit pick at the little thoughts people forget the moment they pass. Speaking of nit pick, change 'I've' to 'I'd'. And maybe a comma after 'that', before 'though'.