Missed Connection

Missed Connection

A Chapter by DavidRyanM

She posted about the guy that was near a tree,
close to the waterfront, smoking a cigarette. I had to think
hard but I was able to recall how early last night, I was close to
the waterfront (maybe a mile or two), there were a few trees lining
the street and I was smoking a cigarette. You can make anything
about you if you want it bad enough. 


© 2011 DavidRyanM


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You summed it all up in the last line. Pretty straight-forward. We all feel that need to be the source of inquiry.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I dig man. Weren't we talking about this a while back? I think the aspect I like most is that he seems fairly unaffected. He's so nonchalant about it. I like that. I think many people in this situation would be devastated, or at least a little shocked it didn't work out like they expected. It seems like the whole thing could just be a joke to him.

Posted 13 Years Ago


gives the "I Saw You" ads a whole new poignancy..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ha.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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