Aching Chest

Aching Chest

A Chapter by DavidRyanM

I held her as we watched a movie. 
She began to cry into my chest and I asked
her what was wrong. She said, "I can't imagine a life
without you. But it existed at one point. And it saddens
me thinking about all we missed out on with each other."


© 2010 DavidRyanM


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Did I ever tell you that you are my hero? It's beautiful, poignant, bitter-sweet. Strange how you find those people later on in life and wonder why you couldn't have sooner. Very, very good.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A heart tugger indeed. That ache in the chest is impossible to get rid of. I love it man.

Posted 14 Years Ago


oh.. David. this one is a heart tugger. i know very intimately the emotion expressed.. you capture that half happy, half despondant moment with such tender precision. i love it. just love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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