Travelling Under Ground

Travelling Under Ground

A Chapter by DavidRyanM

They stomp around and it sounds like
they're trying to dig right through the ceiling. 
You follow one of them from the room to the kitchen.
There's another one and I follow them, taking a right 
towards the bathroom. With guns raised, you count to three...
Maybe we'll get some sleep tonight. 


© 2010 DavidRyanM


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This actually struck me as morbid/comedic. Reminded me a little of my old neighbors that used to fight downstairs.

Posted 14 Years Ago


ever see "the people under the stairs"? completely reminded me of that.. eerie and freaky and more than a little unsettling in the matter of fact tone. made me glad i live in a boat cos any noises in the walls would freak me right the hell out now. amazing love!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love it. It's eerie...f*****g neighbors.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I have no idea what this is, but it gives me chills.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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