Huffing

He said he came from the seedy underbelly

of the seedy underbelly. I made a pot of coffee

and we talked deep into the evening. I can't remember

a single word he had said to me, but I vividly recall

how he cried when I brought up how I miss the touch of 

a long lost girlfriend. 

Reviews

[Gandré]

such small pearls.. your small fragments.....

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

i love these sort of chance happenings..

and yet, for some reason, it made me think of what would happen if i ever got my father into a room he couldnt run from. would we have a profound conversation like this?

[Leap]

Great f****n' title. The repetition of "seedy underbelly" is fantastic. It reminds me of "a friend of a friend," or "I knew a guy who knew a guy." See you soon man.

[Pen Draggin']

I like the double e's. "Seedy" and "deep" along with the sound of "evening." This was a very auditory piece for me.