Sideways Glances

Sideways Glances

A Chapter by DavidRyanM

She told me to kiss her in a crowded room. 
"This is your chance," she said. "To make me change
my mind." I kissed her as passionately as I had practiced. 
She looked me in the eyes and said, "I was wrong. We
can be friends though."


© 2010 DavidRyanM


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LOL oh wow. yes. i know this moment pretty deeply. man, how can it still sting so sharply?

but then, we have learned that practicing kisses doesnt work quite as well as just dropping the world and going atit

Posted 14 Years Ago


This gives me the same feeling that 500 days of summer gives me about halfway through the film. Its a very large warm and fuzzy feeling that's disgustingly bitter because you know things will not end the way you want them to. I dig it. Like a lot. When I was reading I was expecting "as passionately as I could" but that was not what was written. And what was written was so much f*****g better. I love that line.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Bummer. You and I needed to sharpen those skills a wee bit longer, didn't we? Oh well, very good my friend. Makes me want to laugh and say booo, all at the same time.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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