Coming Attractions

Coming Attractions

A Chapter by DavidRyanM

He stared at her a*s and thought of the men she had been with.
He wanted to gently remove her clothes and kiss the indents
on her shoulders that the bra straps left. She asked him if he
wanted to grab a drink. He said he was busy but maybe another time.
He wasn't ready for that kind of thing yet. 


© 2011 DavidRyanM


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He wanted to gently remove her clothes and kiss the indents
on her shoulders that the bra straps left

that bit is the killer. it's so tender and precise.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Title is genius. Fix error in the last line and it's f*****g perfect.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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