Grating Against This Wind

Grating Against This Wind

A Chapter by DavidRyanM

The way the sun bounced off her ivory skin
and her petite fingertips caressed the blades of 
grass we lied upon as she told me she loved me.
These are the things I think about when nothing
else seems to be going my way.


© 2010 DavidRyanM


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soft and delicate.. we all need to have such lovely yearning moments to make our worlds worth it...

(psst lay not lied ;))

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love how these shorts all feel like snippets from multiple people's diaries. That's what they feel like to me at least. I like it man. I like it a lot. It's f****n two sentences long and projects something so much further. The first part is the set-up for a scene. The second is an explanation of the scene, whether a memory or just a day-dream. Simplicity is a beautiful thing, my friend.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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