To a Shropshire Lad DisheartenedA Poem by David PlantingaTerence, this is stupid stuff: no beer here, just entropy. I put a trochee in the second foot of the first line of the fourth stanza for the harshness of it. I also meant the double plural in the fiThe trouble started on the day After the day before. Youth and hope and love decay, And regret won’t restore.
It seems this old and weary world Holds much more bad than good. I’d have assayed, but I was hurled In this life before I could.
A world of cloud and bitterness, A life of scrape and thorn, So who would ever acquiesce Ever to be born?
Because briars outnumber flowers By ten to one at least, Weakness humbles mighty powers. Famine goes before the feast.
But feasts are more than fillings ups, And hunger’s just a pinch. And emptiness can’t stopper cups, And straitening can’t cinch.
Bounty and joy are plenitude, And destitution lack, So revel in what’s nice, or lewd, No loss can take it back.
A single flower fortifies To brush away the burs. Striving wins because it tries. Forlorn despairing errs. © 2021 David Plantinga |
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Added on July 9, 2021 Last Updated on November 15, 2021 Tags: quatrain, ballad stanza, rhymed verse AuthorDavid PlantingaPittsburgh, PAAboutFor shorter poems I'm experimenting with ballad and In Memoriam stanzas. more..Writing
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