Bottom Rim

Bottom Rim

A Poem by David Plantinga
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another poem in ballad stanza

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A drunkard’s guzzled several days,

And staggering outside,

Dull and disoriented, seeks,

But cannot find, a guide.


The hour proclaimed is even six,

Twice daily otium.

The arrow hangs at bottom rim

Like a dead pendulum.


The birth and dying of the light

Are symmetry in dim.

The day is leaching into night,

Or morning’s failing him.

© 2021 David Plantinga


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Added on June 18, 2021
Last Updated on November 29, 2021
Tags: alcoholism, quatrain, ballad stanza, rhymed verse

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David Plantinga
David Plantinga

Pittsburgh, PA



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For shorter poems I'm experimenting with ballad and In Memoriam stanzas. more..

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