Corridors

Corridors

A Poem by David Plantinga
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Leafing through Kafka brought on this picture of a subdued afterlife.

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What tempted me to join the queue?

It must be some great treat.

Only delight could keep these souls

Shuffling on blistered feet.


I turned a corner hours ago,

Quite perpendicular,

But as I count the corners off

I’ve tallied five so far.


The walls are clean, but they’re not bright,

Scrubbed to sobriety.

I passed a blotch I’d seen before,

But it might lie to me.


This line may loop into a square,

And no one’s first or last,

And all who’ve shuffled patiently

Are doomed to lose the past.


Did I ascend to this closed floor

By staircase or by lift?

Outside must lie some wider world,

Denied a precious gift.


The walls are bare of openings,

But we need only one.

Quiet can’t be the sole reward

For everything we’ve done.


© 2021 David Plantinga


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Added on April 15, 2021
Last Updated on November 29, 2021
Tags: purgatory, eternity, afterlife, ballad stanza, rhymed verse

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David Plantinga
David Plantinga

Pittsburgh, PA



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