"It's Weird"

Retrospect makes for a sad poem

It’s weird to think of all you meant to me,
and the lot i would deny,
its weird to think how i must of hurt you,
I saw the pain in your eye,

It’s weird to think how much I missed!
How time travelled Fast,
Its weird that you've become a different person,
Since i saw you last,

Its weird to think its over,
this trial i had created
Its weird to think its all gone,
bar this pain, which left me sated,

It’s weird now to say I liked you,
And your cutest smile…
It’s weird to say I "never liked you that way",
When I loved you, all the while

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Sweet piece...I like the subtlety, and it really brought me back to a place in my past. There are so many times when you don't say what you really feel, and then the moment is passed, sometimes forever. *sigh* This truly brings back memories for me.

A few editing issues...the "i's" need capitalization, and perhaps a few other little things, but overall, nicely done.