Hi-U Haiku

Toothpaste first on brush

Brush then slips into a mouth

Silence is golden

 

Golden memories

Of special days long ago

Sneezes aren’t silent

 

The silent willows

Are teased by a gentle breeze

I stubbed my big toe

 

Reviews

[mou]

Three haikus are beautiful and I feel they all are about a single subject but at different times!
- mou

[Dave Brown]

They are an interesting form of poetics which are always fun to play with
Thanks for both visit and comment which are both a pleasure to (i before e except after c) receive.
Cheers

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Dave… “A gentle breeze kissed my face… as the Heather found me by the Sea”. Your Haiku is a token of Hospitality. Be blessed. gently, Pat

[Dave Brown]

Blesses to you also Pat
Good to hear from you and hope all is well with the warmer weather bringing garden's alive.
Take care