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Shy Guy

Shy Guy

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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Malcolm Barry was never to marry

Basically, because he was just too darned shy

Whenever he was in another’s company

He simply couldn’t look them straight in the eye

(a rare case of can’tlookthemrightintheeyeitus)

 

The way he would always tend to observe

Was from a distance far, far to the rear

But the difficulty with this sort of association

Was making conversations too very difficult to hear

 

Although, he was still to become involved in romance

After admiring the rear view of a ‘Cher’s’ sleek hair

He, talking to ‘Cher’s’ shapely back, had taken a chance

And to Cher’s hair, with prayer, did dare, to pair a rare affair

 

Coming together on a night, with star’s shinning bright

T’was when Malcom bravely chanced pon a full facial sight

But the facial sight of that other, created such fright

That their brief emotional affair, had Malcolm take flight

 

A Shookin Malcolm has again chosen to be alone   

Sincw, only communicating when done by cell phone            

Although this decision’s made him more of an unknown

He’s found he now saves a ton on cologne  

 



© 2024 Dave Brown


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He should have rehearsed with Cher's current face. Might have prepared him better.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Dave Brown

6 Months Ago

as usual, excellent advise
Unfortunate that it comes just too late
Thank you John
Aww poor Malcom’s and the frontal view. Appearance can be deceiving sometimes. Loved this comical poem.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Dave Brown

6 Months Ago

truth is, some guys just don't have what it takes Malcom is just a wus
Basically he needs to .. read more
Poetic Beauty

6 Months Ago

Sounds like Malcom needs someone to give him lessons lol
Very cute, i could sense but you hided it to be known.
Well, the rare affair of them couldnt even kiss it lead too,
I write from back to front to end the sentence with meaning but all might think this is self killing not of quran which says and reads from back to front though i am from reading to from front. I too shy i am. By the way i am a devotee of lord god.
Ladies are naturally with shyness and men looks cuter when they feel shy with his lady.

Thank you for sharing this cute lines of your little secret enclosed in our which you let it out in our Nilavarakundu, which is usually in our hometown of our home which and where our grand parents parents had romance.

Thank you,
Jessy jacob.




Posted 6 Months Ago


Dave Brown

6 Months Ago

Many thanks Jessy

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