Sweet Tooth

Sweet Tooth

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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Taking my sweet tooth to those place

Where dark chocolate skies are bright

There sweetness lights my face

Where candy moon's all take flight

 

Riding strawberry milkshake shouting out

Where cakes and butterhorn’s happily lay 

Partaking of dozens of vanilla cake-donuts

Midst marshmallow cheese-cake’s at play

 

Diving into dreams of coconut creams

While swimming through rice pudding pie

No stopping til I eat a whip cream lollipop

While chewing on a bubblegum butterfly

 

When the caramel candy creek run's high     

And rock candies sparkle through night

There neath that mars bar's chocolate sky

I’ll keep feeding my sweet tooth’s appetite

 

 



© 2024 Dave Brown


Author's Note

Dave Brown
With old age becoming less popular
Some old cronies try to wish on a star
But with this sorry process
Being too hard to address
They go blow their savings on a new car

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dear Dave… reminds me of Burl Ives singing Big Rock Candy Mountain… Sweet dreams… dear Friend. softly, Pat

Posted 9 Months Ago


Dave Brown

9 Months Ago

I'd forgotten all about both him and that song
I'll have to get Google to play it again for m.. read more
Fun poem!!!! And tasty too! 🍭

Posted 9 Months Ago


Dave Brown

9 Months Ago

Thanks Anita
Hard to say no to any of it
Diabetics should not read this one.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Dave Brown

9 Months Ago

perhaps a dental visit would suppress any urges

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