Lovely Randene

Lovely Randene

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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Marty loved gorgeous Randene

Who was constructed specially good

Their wish was to build a cute cabin

Deep in the wild wilderness wood

Where fabled, flying, forest fairy’s

Enjoyed their magical livelihood

 

But finances were a serious issue

Because Marty was surely broke

And financing any forest structure

Was simply no kind of a joke

But Marty had one thing goin for him

He once being a rip-snortin cowpoke

 

But cattle proddin was not much fun

And those interest rates on mortgages

Got dazzling Randene and Marty real numb

So he decided to stick-up a stagecoach

With his very well-endowed honey-bun

To get thet thar cute cabin

In the north woods too nicely done

 

But an hombre’ ridin the stage that day

Went by the name of New Mexico Red

And all them muchachos all round

Knew his quick gun left em’ all dead

But Marty not knowin bout this situation

Unfortunately, got hisself shot in the head

Leaving gorgeous Randene to hook up with

A lonely, New Mexico Red, instead

 

They now both live together

Midst that deep forest scene

Where butterfly’s flutter, song bird’s fly,

Squirrel’s climb trees, colored emerald green

Where the fabled, flying, forest fairies

Have welcomed well-endowed Randene

N’ Marty don’t think bout forest lore no more

Since each one of them is rarely seen

 

 



© 2024 Dave Brown


Author's Note

Dave Brown
There was an awfully large fellow named Bruce
Who had an overly obtuse caboose
Since his butt was wabblin
He stopped extra gobblin
Having Bruce and his caboose calling truce


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Imaginative and creative scenes. Good poem

Posted 9 Months Ago


Dave Brown

9 Months Ago

Thanks Arundass
Always fun writing these foolish things
Enjoy your day/night ?
It seems Randene didn't go overboard on grief. I can see why Marty isn't seen anymore, but what's keeping her incognito? Too busy hauling New Mexico Red's ashes?

Posted 9 Months Ago


Dave Brown

9 Months Ago

once again your intuition has nailed it John
Than you for the visit
Dave Brown

9 Months Ago

I'd say I missed a (k)
Erratic meter but oh so visual in the process! Seems for once the bad guy got the girl! Great visual.. would willingly move to a place in the middle of that nowhere!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Dave Brown

9 Months Ago

LOL
It does seem much like a bumpy stagecoach ride
I'll have to improve my blacktoppin.. read more
emmajoygreen

9 Months Ago

Keep it YOU.. that's what makes it unique!
Dave Brown

9 Months Ago

✔️ ✔️

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Added on January 21, 2024
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