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The Wild Side

The Wild Side

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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My yellow horse, stride by stride

Took me to the wild side

To a grand gala affair

Where girls with pink hair

Danced through night air

Each dressed nice n’ pretty

Although it was a pity

During my stay for a week

Never once did they speak

 

I saw crocodile’s ears

Fish entertaining their peers

And pigs with three ears

All drinkin cold beers

 

Outside the horse stable

Our doorman, Clark Gable

Standing by a stable table

Warned bout the hallway ahead

Where wild dreams were all fed

Where lies were being said

Where I would have to tread

On a very thin thread

To return to my bed

And remove my tired head

 

I saw crocodile’s ears

Fish entertaining their peers

And pigs with three ears

All drinking cold beers

 

While pretty ladies danced round

Each in their new silken gown

All offered a frown

As I lay my head down

Then they took many hours

To arrange donated flowers

Till I understood from my head

Under skies turning red

Sweet angels had said

That I was being constantly fed

Excess med after med

 

With crocodile ears now in arrears

Flying fish were filled with fears

And those pigs which were once dears

Now drank nuthin cept’ boiling beers

 

Then I met a girl that was too fair

With us since becoming a pair

We both danced all through my hair

Each with love meant to share

 

There were no others to compare

It was for her only her I could care

And as her brown eyes lit night’s air

Gently, we floated away as a pair

 

 



© 2024 Dave Brown


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You both danced all through your hair? Hope she wasn't wearing stiletto heels.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Dave Brown

9 Months Ago

especially since I'm so thin on the top
Beautiful and wonderful dance of words Dave.
"Then I met a girl that was too fair
With us since becoming a pair
We both danced all through my hair
Each with love meant to share"
I adored the above lines. A good place to know and thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Months Ago


one could get lost in this enticing world you created here.
enchanting read. personally got lost in the daydream.
{beautifully written.}

Posted 9 Months Ago


Dave Brown

9 Months Ago

At times, getting lost in daydreams really doesn't sound too bad
Thanks for yourvisit
Seems a colourful touch of madness here.. but then it could be far worse, could be the wild, crazy world we live in. At least in your world there are different scenes, different people and for sure, moods to suit every hour.. all things almost beautiful. Reads and sounds like a song on high!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Dave Brown

9 Months Ago

yes, this mad mad world seeming to be the new trend which hopefully, the right song would help endread more
i think i've created a monster, not to mention a pig with three ears. oh well, all's well that end's well ... :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


Dave Brown

9 Months Ago

Thanks Pete
Keep writing those beauties

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