Poor Jack

Poor Jack

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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Poor Jack suffered candlestick ire

Cuz he should have jumped somewhat higher

His manly type diddle

Got stuck in the middle

And expired from unfriendly fire



© 2023 Dave Brown


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How nice. We'll get new diddle.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Dave Brown

1 Year Ago

I understand there is a Xmas diddle sale on now at Toys R Us!!!
Thanks for visit
Oh my. It looks as though Jack's pickle was in quite the pickle. Fun write! Jack best start training so he can be quicker and more nimble.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Dave Brown

1 Year Ago

Thanks Starbaby
But I think Jack's post is now toast
fun read brought a quick smile and a sincere grimace -carl

Posted 1 Year Ago


Dave Brown

1 Year Ago

yes
doubt he'll try that again
Thanks Carl
dear Dave … very apropos in these times… and Clever. gently, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


Dave Brown

1 Year Ago

thanks Pat
Your little birds look bright against their snowy background
We are having .. read more
Oh poor Jack, what a way to go! Very clever brevity Dave,
Enjoyed it.
Warmly, BESTB

Posted 1 Year Ago


Dave Brown

1 Year Ago

warmly 2U2 BESTB
Hope all goes well
thanks 4 stopping by

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