Sunlight Slivers

Sunlight Slivers

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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Sunlight slivers onto an aged mossed roof

Slipping past sentinels towering aloof

Where intrusions neath Cedar and Firs

A creeping forest possessively blurs

 

Silver salal seeks cross shaded root

A rotted stump wears a decaying boot

A black Eagle stares from a cedar shoot

Scars of intrusion, steadily dilute

 

Soft wings, like a phantom’s breeze

On a limb, silent squirrel taking ease

A woodpecker’s echo travels the deep

Morn’s dew retreats from eve’s sleep

 

Cougars return to tend their affairs 

Grizzlies seek round for winter lairs

A fading totem blends into moist ground

An owl comment’s with its hooty sound

 

No more sounds of double axe blows

Now only cackling and cawing of crows

As the old cedar cabin crumbles each day

Wilderness re-serves its’ miracle entree  

 

 



© 2023 Dave Brown


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Nice word portrait of a forest scene at a particular moment, Dave. It sounds as though the forest is in the process of retrieving lost ground.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Dave Brown

1 Year Ago

Yes, it is, at least behind and above us
App 100 yrs, ago a small plane crashed into the moun.. read more
dear Dave… Cedar and Firs give Comfort through the years. The seasons come and go… as the trees keep Vigil as Bears sleep in Caves.. I prefer my Sleigh Bed… a very sentimental poem of bygone days… even my Grandparents saw their home beyond repair… but then again.. perhaps I am beyond repair. Cheers for all the tomorrows. Softly, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


The old cedar cabin has its ghosts. The creatures of the wild aren’t afraid. Great description here Dave. Much enjoyed.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Dave Brown

1 Year Ago

Thanks again Chris
but
Shouldn't you be in bed asleep
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

I’m in bed wide awake. Insomnia. It’s either WC or netflix. Netflix means I would have to go dow.. read more
Dave Brown

1 Year Ago

LOL
I know the feeling
super frustrating
Poetically imaginative.

I could see the crows dance along the tree branches. Great read.

With love,

Matthew

Posted 1 Year Ago


Dave Brown

1 Year Ago

yes, those crazy crows
always making their share of forest noises
Thanks for the visit

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