Poignant Poetry

Poignant Poetry

A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
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one looks at portraits, or does the portrait look at you

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Startled…twas, I pulled up short
Taken aback by melancholy eyes
The visage in the portrait tore
My sight in deep surprise

A wistful smile purveyed in lambent oil
A silent plea her image comprised
“Please remain, a meager moment’s toil
Allow me your attentions…let us both surmise”

I…in momentary transfixion held
By mysterious confliction of canvas and eye
The “fixed in forever” person within
That but for a moment had come alive

The magic moment slowly ceased to persist
Our gaze slowly broken
As fades the fog,…the morning mist
We communed, tho’ had ne’er spoken

Her request, unspoken , writ upon my back
As I moved to the portrait next
In quiescent plea, pled “remain with me”
I yet perceive her tacit text

© 2012 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)


Author's Note

David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
Written intentionally archaic/inspired by Charles Dicken's "Oliver twist"

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Added on February 18, 2012
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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Las Vegas, NV



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Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..

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