Blessings And Wonders

Blessings And Wonders

A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
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Tallying up the good things

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Small Wonders

I count the things…that still work right
While on my morning stroll
My eyes still see the morning light…
(Tho as seen from a deep dark hole)

My knees this morn are trying hard to please
Flexing without a plaint
Bearing my weight with ill-feigned ease
And creaks kept dim and faint

My hips move as if newly greased
Each stride a pure delight
The pain is gone...not merely eased
They got better…overnight

My fingers flex like fingers should
I can pick up things…and write
They’re not like gnarly sticks of wood
This morn they work just right

My eyes enjoyed this morn’s sunrise
Savored it with sensual delight
Op’ed wide in delighted surprise
After a night of full moonlight

My ears clearly hear the Sweet song of birds
Their early morning chatter
I can almost discern individual words
In their chirpy, peeping patter

And last, but not least
My often aching feet…
This morn the aches have ceased it seems 
(so far)

It seems my brain has given my ol’ bod
A reprieve for just a bit
With perhaps a little help from God
I intend to fully enjoy it!

© 2018 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)


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This makes me think of someone with lupus or arthritis or such like. On a daily bases and the weather affects their condition and health. And with a beautiful day ahead walking outside. It seemed to fill them rejuvenation and joy. Making them feel instantly better in general, giving them a health boost.

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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)

5 Years Ago

True Dawn. I think one has almost a moral obligation to walk if you can, to get off of your can if .. read more
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

my pleasure. Really good poem that makes you appreciate and take on board a lot of things.



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They say getting old is a priviledge, and it is! ( sometimes lol).
Also i do believe that if we have pain quite often then we do appreciate mornings like this one when nature is at its best and we can really enjoy the beauty and freedom when others may well take it for granted.

A lovely poem , rhyme and meter flowing so easily :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)

5 Years Ago

Yes indeed Stella It's good to feel good. I wish everyone could. Thanks for reading me.
Stella Armour

5 Years Ago

my pleasure :)
This makes me think of someone with lupus or arthritis or such like. On a daily bases and the weather affects their condition and health. And with a beautiful day ahead walking outside. It seemed to fill them rejuvenation and joy. Making them feel instantly better in general, giving them a health boost.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)

5 Years Ago

True Dawn. I think one has almost a moral obligation to walk if you can, to get off of your can if .. read more
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

my pleasure. Really good poem that makes you appreciate and take on board a lot of things.

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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Las Vegas, NV



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Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..

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