Ode To Heavenly Hues

Just another Sunset Poem

The canvas upon

Which Sunsets are drawn

The palette that proffers

The hues…

The stroke of the brush

‘Pon the edge of the earth

The purples, the crimsons

The blues..

The portrait that’s painted

Each day at dusk

At times displays 

The husk of a day…

Once so bright and roseate

So vibrant and sunny

As if God and Angels

Have conspired to create

A hue hallowed and new

The colour of blood

…mixed with honey…

Author's Note

As usual; hard to find a rhythm (but trust me it's kinda' there!) And with free verse I think It's less about the rhyme and rhythm and more about emotion conveyed. (but that's just me!)

Reviews

[Nightfeather]

This poem is very well written but the rhythm is no there yet. You should try to add line break (to give your poem a clean look) and make use of syllables, for they can greatly enhance ones poem if done right but I can feel that you have talent but your sentences sound really beautiful. So you should never give up on writing.

Good job :D

[David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)]

Not goin' to give up! (at least not til I die) I appreciate your comments. They show you're a keen fan of poetry and take the time to Parse out a poem. Thank you for reading me Nightfeather!

[Nightfeather]

No problem :)