The Primal Mind

The Primal Mind

A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
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Dark Places from whence we came (and where some of us revisit time to time)

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There’s a darkness that dwells
Within the shadowed wells 
of man’s mind
A darkness  where dark things reside…
It’s  place dark as ink
Where things slither and slink
Where lives none such
As prudence and pride
It’s a cold and dark haven
Dark as the eyes of a Raven
Slick moist black
Unblinking…ope’d wide
As dark as the depths 
Of abyssal ocean
As persistent and insistent
As moon’s pull pon’ the tide
Dark and infernal
Yet e’er eternal
Indeed… they have need to hide…
Kept close, deep within
By morals stretched thin
Is the Darkness that dwells
…In man’s mind…

© 2015 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)


Author's Note

David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
As usual in my poetry The intended rhythm can be hard to find. (Which makes it a challenge to readers who like to puzzle things out)

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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Las Vegas, NV



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Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..

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