Teardrops And Memories

Built on the foundation of my Senryu "Angels Listen In"

Sometimes my eyes spring
tiny leaks and memories
Course down my cheeks

To fall upon
My aching heart
And tear my very soul apart

Salty drops of memory
That overflow
And sadden me

Twixt dusk and dawn
 Time far and near
Tis the  time the tears appear…

Do Angels listen
As tears glisten
And tis solace that I seek

In the tiny leaks
Where memories
Course slowly

…Down my cheeks…

Reviews

[Divya]

Beautiful poem. Tears are depicted in a very beautiful way. Magic of words is made in this work

[Marie]

A bit of music, a scent can open the rivulets...
Surface tears only hint at the sea beneath...

[David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)]

And once again Your comments make me want to turn your review into a poem (and I will unless you say otherwise!) Your comments are as, if not more poetic than most peoples poetry! Quite a skill to weave poetry into you commentary! I am going to give your review a good review Marie!

[Marie]

Thanks. Y our poetry can move me to poetry.