Sweet As Wine

It's of rain

Rain washed air…sweet as wine
The rain itself a sure footed dancer
Showers of silver…mist so fine
Quiet as questions that have no answers

Distant thunder that tears asunder
The fragile silence that falls in tatters
As if the world is stunned in wonder
And the pearls of rain are all that truly matters

Author's Note

Best read quickly!!!

The first two lines are the work of Marie..
the rest of the poem is my finish
to what Marie left uncompleted
So if Marie is not happy with me
This poem will soon be deleted

Reviews

[Marie]

You did a much better job with those two line than I could have. I would have made this just another insipid greeting card verse, but you made it real poetry.