In Nature

In Nature

A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
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All the same to Mother Nature

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Tides are to pulse as
Breath to breeze…tempest no more
Than a robust sneeze



© 2015 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)


Author's Note

David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
And this Senryu no more than a snicker

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It's a very good senyru. I like its rhyme and rythm--most senyrus don't have that.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Las Vegas, NV



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Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..

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