Different Kind Of Book

Different Kind Of Book

A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
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What one's face says about you

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Whiskey nose, baggy eyes
Furrowed brow and ruddy cheeks
Wistful look on wasted face
Oh, the many years this face bespeaks

Lines laid down by life’s stern pen
A story writ by time and then:
revised and rewritten o’er and o’er again
‘Pon living parchment of brow and cheeks

A living tome of life and time
From mother’s milk to summer wine
In living lines…Aye, a book
…is this face of mine…

© 2015 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)


Author's Note

David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
My face no longer looks so good, but it's a lot more expressive! That's my message.

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I totally agree. Every white hair on my head has its own story and its own meaning. I enjoy every one and who cares what they look like to people who weren't even there at the time?

Posted 9 Years Ago


It's a long time since I looked in the mirror and recognised who it was. This old guy keeps following me around and peering back at me from the mirror. No idea who it is, but I won't give him the satisfaction of a greeting. I just grump at him, and he walks away...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Funny thing, my dad and I were having a conversation on these lines just a couple of weeks ago. One of his favourite claims is that since he started drawing his pension, he never bothers looking in the mirror any more; and my usual reply is to tell him he's as handsome as ever.

I think the last verse of this poem sums it all up perfectly.

Beccy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


And a very interesting piece it is to read, I'm sure.

Posted 9 Years Ago


i like that....as we get older, we may not look as spry with perfect features. We become weathered and a bit withered, but our face is a book that has had many stories read from it...and the pages to get a bit crumply---and dog eared....but we are expressive volumes.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Las Vegas, NV



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Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..

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