Remember Me (Like This)

Remember Me (Like This)

A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
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Wishful thinking

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Remember me  (like this)…

A smile that made your heart
Feel lighter
A word that made your
Day brighter
An embrace you only wanted
To be tighter
Please remember me…
Like this

Forget the frowns
Forget the pouts
Forget the downs
The angry bouts
Forget the times
I wasn’t there
Forgive me for that
Frigid stare and…

Remember me like this…

A hug whenever you
Needed one
A back rub…
late at night
A place to go to
When you felt so low
A touch that felt
So right

Remember me…

The provider for the family
Companion always there
Old friend and confidante
Cuddly Teddy bear
Gentle soul with good intentions
A moral man who could not lie
Humble man with no pretensions
A man you can’t forget, even if you try

A stubborn man…I’ll give you this
A simple man…tho’ a bit remiss
A man always ready
with a tender kiss
So when, (and if…) you reminisce

Please remember me
…Like this…


© 2014 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)


Author's Note

David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
Not meant to conform to rules. It is what it is: a hodge-podge of rhyme, free verse and wishful thinking

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I could not have said it better my self. This exactly how I would want to be remembered.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I'll call this free verse. And I'm sure you'll be remembered for this poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)

10 Years Ago

A very kind review. Thanks Marie. Appreciate ya'

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Added on June 17, 2014
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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Las Vegas, NV



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Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..

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