For Just An Instant

For Just An Instant

A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
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ruefully wistful

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Could we go back….for just an instant
How would we choose just where to go
So many places…so insistent
How would we ever know

Where to start, we’d likely muse
Just where that instant
Should be used
And how that it should end

Too many instances
So many mistakes (in my case)
Cringes and winces
o’er so many heartbreaks

Could I go back…
E’en just for an instant
I’d fill that instant
With love and care

Though there’s “Oh so many…
Far, far, too many!”
Instances…
For me to share

If I could go back…
make different choices
Listen more closely
To different voices

Perhaps I would not
Want to go back
Perhaps what I did
Was the best I could do

But had I the choice to go back
and I could…e’en just for an instant,
In a heartbeat, I would!
But pray tell would you?



© 2013 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)


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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
Look at this one! (but just for an instant!)

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If i could only go back in time
to correct the sins of my youth
I could tell him to be like me
and know I was telling the truth

Yes I would do it .

Posted 10 Years Ago


Go back again...and make the same heat-breaking mistake...?...that led me to attempt suicide...put me in the hopsital...destroyed the life I had...?

In a New York second I would.

Posted 10 Years Ago


David, the flow and use of language is incredible....you say so much in so few words and all done so beautifully. I appreciate your gift.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Las Vegas, NV



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Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..

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