When all the world is right

When all the world is right

A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
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That elusive moment

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That perfect moment.
Quintessential  moment in time
Vibes in exquisite harmony
The planets all aligned


Eyes that glow
Senses heightened
Feelings flow
Mind enlightened

So rarely felt …so sorely missed
So primal and so  potent
Evanescent as morning mist
…elusive perfect moment…



© 2013 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)


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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
wait until you're very mellow to review this

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I have had a few such moments...they still warm my life...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)

11 Years Ago

Then feel blessed Marie, for some people never are given the opportunity. Thanks for your words. App.. read more

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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Las Vegas, NV



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Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..

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